Pronoun Problems

Some of the most common mistakes peoplewould say "she went roller skating." When you
make when writing or speaking have to do withbreak it down in this way, you can see, and hear,
pronouns. A pronoun, of course, is a word thatthe correct way of saying this sentence.
takes the place of a noun. If we didn't useCorrect: She and her friend went roller skating.
pronouns, a sentence might look like this: As Mr.What about this example?
Perkins entered the conference room, Mr. PerkinsIncorrect: For Annie and I, planning the trip to
thought to Mr. Perkins, "These meetings are suchJapan was almost as exciting as the trip itself.
a waste of Mr. Perkins' time."To determine whether to use I or me in a
It is almost exhausting to read even a shortsentence like this, take out Annie and, leaving this:
sentence worded this way! But substitute someFor I, planning the trip to Japan was almost as
of the nouns with pronouns and it looks like this:exciting as the trip itself. You would not say for I,
As Mr. Perkins entered the conference room, heyou would say for me, and that is how you say it
thought to himself, "These meetings are such awhen you add the words Annie and back in:
waste of my time."Correct: For Annie and me, planning the trip to
The second sentence is much easier to read andJapan was almost as exciting as the trip itself.
comprehend, right? Here is a brief refresherReaders become confused when a pronoun could
course on the different types of pronouns, howrefer to more than one noun, as in the following:
they are often used incorrectly, and how they"Cleaning products can be harmful to young
should be used.children. Make sure you keep them in a locked
Types of Pronounscabinet."
Personal pronouns substitute for people or things:Should we lock the children in a cabinet, or the
you, I, me, him, her, he, she, it, us, them, we,cleaning products? Common sense tells us that it
they.is the cleaning products that should be locked up,
Example: I went to San Diego last weekend.but always be aware that your writing can be
Possessive pronouns indicate ownership ormisunderstood when a reader is forced to guess
possession: yours, mine, ours, hers, his, theirs.what the pronoun refers to.
Example: "The blue notebook is mine, yours is theIncorrect: When Tim set the bottle on the
green one," Susan said to Tom.glass-topped table, it broke.
Demonstrative pronouns point out a specificWhat broke, the bottle or the table?
person or thing: this, that, these, those.Correct: The bottle broke when Tim set it on the
Example: These shoes are much moreglass-topped table.
comfortable than my old ones.One mistake that people often make is to use a
Relative pronouns show a relationship betweenreflexive pronoun in the place of a simple personal
one part of a sentence and another: who, whom,pronoun.
that, which, whose. Use who, whom or whose toIncorrect: Please let Joan or myself know when
refer to people, and which or that to refer toyou leave the office.
animals or things.Correct: Please let Joan or me know when you
Example: The woman in the green dress, whomleave the office.
I've known for years, is in charge of theAgain, taking out the words Joan or allows us to
campaign.hear the correct way to speak or write this
Example: The living room, which has floor to ceilingsentence.
windows, gets the most sunlight.The pronouns it and they are often used
Reflexive pronouns are used to emphasize a noun:incorrectly, both in speech and in writing. Always
yourself, myself, herself, himself, itself,use it or they to refer to a specific noun, and not
yourselves, themselves, ourselves. In the followingto convey a general idea.
example, the pronoun himself emphasizes theIncorrect: It says in the article that there are 90
noun George.calories in one small banana.
Example: George asked himself, "What would I doCorrect: The article states that there are 90
in the same situation?"calories in one small banana.
A Few Common MistakesIncorrect: In California, they have strict auto
Some of the most common pronoun mistakesemissions regulations.
made in conversation have to do with using twoCorrect: California has strict auto emissions
personal pronouns together.regulations.
Incorrect: Her and her friend went roller skating.This is just a small sampling of the available
Try breaking this sentence down into twoinformation on pronouns and how to use them. A
sentences that separate the actions of the twogood grammar guide, such as Diane Hacker's
people:Rules For Writers, can be purchased at any
Her went roller skating.bookstore, and is an invaluable resource for
Her friend went roller skating.students, writers, or anyone interested in writing
You would not say "her went roller skating," youor speaking well.